Adding detail

You write about your homework, "The Dare."  In your daybook, spend some time explaining why Hoffman took the dare, and what he did.

On your copy of the reading, try to number the steps he gives for his how-to. Bracket his background information.

Circle his introduction and his conclusion. Does he have a thesis statement?

Now you spend some time typing your draft.  Think about your beginning and adding a thesis.

Tomorrow you take a diagnostic test for 30 minutes to help see what you need work on.

Homework:

1.  Read Chapter 4 in Double Take.