Language Use in Kickstarter Due

Citing pictures in YOUR Kickstarter? Use EasyBib...If there is NO citation, we assume you created the picture yourself. I demonstrate -- you have one more day to do this correctly, turn the paper in tomorrow.

Hand in the Language Use in Kickstarter worksheet.  Citation and analogies:
 Why English Teachers Die Young. Note that snopes.com is one place to find out the truth of some internet oddities.

Take the handout and copy down your two favorite "lame analogies" in your daybook. BE SURE TO CREDIT THE SOURCE --THE PERSON WHO MADE IT UP.

We cite the source because of this: Joe was frustrated, like a man who thought his claim to fame was occasional appearances in a weekly humor contest, but in fact is known to millions as a stupid high school student who writes unintentionally humorous bad analogies. (Joseph Romm, Washington)

I return your essays, Solo #1.

Record number of errors: cs   ro    frag    sp     coord       sub   

I'm going to focus on these errors through the quarter.  We'll start here:  Coord/ Sub. Prezi .

Handout illustrates the comma rules connected with using these conjunctions.

Open The Everyday Writer to page 400.

Ex. 39.1 and Ex. 39.2.

 Last 10 minutes -- one more handout. Read and answer the questions at the end in your daybook.

Homework:

1. Finish reading and answering the questions about Pat Bourne in your daybook for tomorrow.

2. Final Version Kickstarter on Paper is due tomorrow. Bring ALL drafts and comment sheets (purple) to hand in with your final printed copy.

3. Daybook Check #2 tomorrow. Have it ready to hand in at the end of class.

4. TWFTD: mastectomy