Draft #1 Due

Today feedback is for ideas. Help each other refine what you have. Try things out.

Step 1:  In a group of three, pass your drafts around. Each of you will read two drafts and fill out a Reader's Page for each. As always, you earn credit towards your paper based on the quality of feedback you give on those pages.

Step 2: When all in the group are done, have a discussion about what each writer plans to work on. Discuss each draft in turn. Give each other ideas for the different Key Elements.

When all are done, I'll assign the Language Use in Kickstarter activity.

Homework:

1. Draft #2 is due on Thursday Aug. 4. It must be typed. Pay special attention to layout; all of page 1 is your hook.

2. Work on Language Use in Kickstarter. It is due with the next daybook check, August 8.

2. TWFTD: cliché.